[AccessD] OT: New Web Site

Beach Access Software bchacc at san.rr.com
Tue Jan 9 20:25:50 CST 2007


OK, check the revised home page.  Better?

Rocky Smolin
Beach Access Software
858-259-4334
www.e-z-mrp.com


-----Original Message-----
From: accessd-bounces at databaseadvisors.com
[mailto:accessd-bounces at databaseadvisors.com] On Behalf Of Keith Williamson
Sent: Tuesday, January 09, 2007 6:05 PM
To: Access Developers discussion and problem solving
Subject: Re: [AccessD] OT: New Web Site

Rocky,

This is a judgment call...but I would refrain from the "Rocky
understands your business"....and instead focus on BAS understands your
business.  You have a business name, which I assume you have been
developing.  I'd focus more on the business credentials, rather than
yours.  You could have another page setup to tout your own
accomplishments.  This is strictly my own interpretation.....not a
critique.  :)  Just my opinion.  You can crumple it up and toss it, with
no feelings hurt. 

:)

Good luck!

Keith E. Williamson | Assist. Controller| kwilliamson at rtkl.com

RTKL Associates Inc. | 901 South Bond Street | Baltimore, Maryland
21231-3305

410-537-6098 direct | 410-276-2136 fax | www.rtkl.com

-----Original Message-----
From: accessd-bounces at databaseadvisors.com
[mailto:accessd-bounces at databaseadvisors.com] On Behalf Of Beach Access
Software
Sent: Tuesday, January 09, 2007 8:48 PM
To: 'Access Developers discussion and problem solving'
Subject: Re: [AccessD] OT: New Web Site

More than.  

See any typos?  Bad grammar? Punctuation?  Awkward wording?  Stupid
things?

I suppose I should turn the Pundit loose on it. 

Any and all suggestions welcome...

Rocky Smolin
Beach Access Software
858-259-4334
www.e-z-mrp.com


-----Original Message-----
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[mailto:accessd-bounces at databaseadvisors.com] On Behalf Of Susan Harkins
Sent: Tuesday, January 09, 2007 5:14 PM
To: 'Access Developers discussion and problem solving'
Subject: Re: [AccessD] OT: New Web Site

Considering editing the text? :) 

Susan H. 

Thank you.  I guess my first problem is to get those long lines of text
shorter.  What's the best way to do this?


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