[AccessD] OT: critique my web site

Gustav Brock gustav at cactus.dk
Wed Jun 16 02:53:41 CDT 2004


Hi Christopher

It does look clean and efficient.

Three things though:

1. Put on the opening page a _brief_ statement on what your primary
business is, which types of customers you are looking for, and why
they should pick you. Shift menu "About CH.." to the right and menu
Services to the left.

2. Contact information is totally missing except for the tiny link
email_me.

3. Don't excuse your neither your site nor yourself (FAQ, paragraph
one and two, and four). In general, don't be defensive. Explain and
state your opinions as if they are or should be the general rule (as
in FAQ, paragraph three). Readers love to agree.

Also, how about some brief cases on some of your projects? And a few
screenshots of your masterpieces, perhaps with credits to the
designers you mention you work with from time to time?

/gustav


> *deep breath*

> I did a bit of a facelift on my website over the past couple weeks. 
> I wonder if you fine folks would mind hitting it and letting me know
> if anything is amiss?  If so, let me know what OS and browser you're
> using.

> Much obliged.  Thanks!

> -Christopher-




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