Keith Williamson
Kwilliamson at RTKL.com
Tue Jan 9 20:05:22 CST 2007
Rocky, This is a judgment call...but I would refrain from the "Rocky understands your business"....and instead focus on BAS understands your business. You have a business name, which I assume you have been developing. I'd focus more on the business credentials, rather than yours. You could have another page setup to tout your own accomplishments. This is strictly my own interpretation.....not a critique. :) Just my opinion. You can crumple it up and toss it, with no feelings hurt. :) Good luck! Keith E. Williamson | Assist. Controller| kwilliamson at rtkl.com RTKL Associates Inc. | 901 South Bond Street | Baltimore, Maryland 21231-3305 410-537-6098 direct | 410-276-2136 fax | www.rtkl.com -----Original Message----- From: accessd-bounces at databaseadvisors.com [mailto:accessd-bounces at databaseadvisors.com] On Behalf Of Beach Access Software Sent: Tuesday, January 09, 2007 8:48 PM To: 'Access Developers discussion and problem solving' Subject: Re: [AccessD] OT: New Web Site More than. See any typos? Bad grammar? Punctuation? Awkward wording? Stupid things? I suppose I should turn the Pundit loose on it. Any and all suggestions welcome... Rocky Smolin Beach Access Software 858-259-4334 www.e-z-mrp.com -----Original Message----- From: accessd-bounces at databaseadvisors.com [mailto:accessd-bounces at databaseadvisors.com] On Behalf Of Susan Harkins Sent: Tuesday, January 09, 2007 5:14 PM To: 'Access Developers discussion and problem solving' Subject: Re: [AccessD] OT: New Web Site Considering editing the text? :) Susan H. Thank you. I guess my first problem is to get those long lines of text shorter. What's the best way to do this? -- AccessD mailing list AccessD at databaseadvisors.com http://databaseadvisors.com/mailman/listinfo/accessd Website: http://www.databaseadvisors.com -- No virus found in this incoming message. Checked by AVG Free Edition. Version: 7.5.432 / Virus Database: 268.16.7/620 - Release Date: 1/8/2007 4:12 PM -- AccessD mailing list AccessD at databaseadvisors.com http://databaseadvisors.com/mailman/listinfo/accessd Website: http://www.databaseadvisors.com