David Mcafee
dmcafee at pacbell.net
Mon Jan 24 12:39:41 CST 2005
The page DOES look more professional now. David --- Rocky Smolin - Beach Access Software <bchacc at san.rr.com> wrote: > Dear List: > > So I hired this PR guy to do PR of E-Z-MRP - > http://www.trcutlerinc.com/. He does strictly > manufacturing software related PR. > > He has a colleague who is apparently a web marketing > whiz and he solicited this guy's opinion about my > site and the guy had some very constructive > criticisms - the most salient of which was that the > home page was not motivating readers to take action. > Good info but weak. > > So we made the old home page a FAQ page and > redesigned the home page for a more forceful call to > action. > > Can you take a look and tell me what you think of > this approach? The old home page you can still see > by clicking FAQ. > > > My site: www.e-z-mrp.com > > Thanks in advance, > > Rocky > -- > AccessD mailing list > AccessD at databaseadvisors.com > http://databaseadvisors.com/mailman/listinfo/accessd > Website: http://www.databaseadvisors.com >