Hale, Jim
Jim.Hale at FleetPride.com
Mon Jan 24 16:33:28 CST 2005
<Challenge/Solution Table: I would reduce the font size. I'd like to be able to see the first four challenge/solution pairs on a 1024 x 768 screen without scrolling. Ideally, your best 3 should be visible on 800 x 600.> Rocky, This was going to be my comment as well so I second Ken's motion. Jim Hale -----Original Message----- From: Ken Ismert [mailto:KIsmert at TexasSystems.com] Sent: Monday, January 24, 2005 3:05 PM To: 'Access Developers discussion and problem solving' Subject: RE: [AccessD] OT: Opinions needed Rocky, Definitely better. Feedback: Top Row: A Tabbed presentation of the top row of links (Home, FAQs , etc) would remove the need to repeat the current selection in bold orange, further shrinking the page vertically. This gives more room for your sales points. Consider re-ordering your top row links. "Screens" and "Reports" should probably be promoted to the left, while "FAQs" and especially "History" should be demoted to the right. Challenge/Solution Table: I would reduce the font size. I'd like to be able to see the first four challenge/solution pairs on a 1024 x 768 screen without scrolling. Ideally, your best 3 should be visible on 800 x 600. You should underline your links in the solutions column. If that looks too cluttered, consider an underlined link that says "more.." at the end of each solution. Even though the text of your main page is tightly edited, I would cut it down even more. You probably have 15 to 20 seconds to convince your average visitor to continue looking at your site. The more pithy points you can ping into their brain during that time, the better the chance you will snag them. -Ken -----Original Message----- From: Rocky Smolin - Beach Access Software [mailto:bchacc at san.rr.com] Sent: Sunday, January 23, 2005 11:41 PM To: AccessD at databaseadvisors.com Subject: [AccessD] OT: Opinions needed Dear List: So I hired this PR guy to do PR of E-Z-MRP - http://www.trcutlerinc.com/. He does strictly manufacturing software related PR. He has a colleague who is apparently a web marketing whiz and he solicited this guy's opinion about my site and the guy had some very constructive criticisms - the most salient of which was that the home page was not motivating readers to take action. Good info but weak. So we made the old home page a FAQ page and redesigned the home page for a more forceful call to action. Can you take a look and tell me what you think of this approach? The old home page you can still see by clicking FAQ. My site: www.e-z-mrp.com Thanks in advance, Rocky -- AccessD mailing list AccessD at databaseadvisors.com http://databaseadvisors.com/mailman/listinfo/accessd Website: http://www.databaseadvisors.com *********************************************************************** The information transmitted is intended solely for the individual or entity to which it is addressed and may contain confidential and/or privileged material. Any review, retransmission, dissemination or other use of or taking action in reliance upon this information by persons or entities other than the intended recipient is prohibited. If you have received this email in error please contact the sender and delete the material from any computer. As a recipient of this email, you are responsible for screening its contents and the contents of any attachments for the presence of viruses. No liability is accepted for any damages caused by any virus transmitted by this email.