Arthur Fuller
fuller.artful at gmail.com
Tue Apr 21 06:57:10 CDT 2009
Hi Shamil, I have touched up your English text and hopefully improved it a little. Arthur On Tue, Apr 21, 2009 at 6:28 AM, Mike Mattys <mmattys at rochester.rr.com>wrote: > Warm. > Inviting. > Humorous. > A touch of wonder added, as well. > Very good! > > - > Michael R Mattys > MapPoint and Database Dev > www.mattysconsulting.com > - > > ----- Original Message ----- > From: "Salakhetdinov Shamil" <mcp2004 at mail.ru> > To: "dba-VB" <dba-vb at databaseadvisors.com> > Sent: Tuesday, April 21, 2009 6:13 AM > Subject: [dba-VB] CodePlex Northwind.NET - Welcome,Mission Statement and > Roadmap sections added to home page > > > > Hi SCRUM Team, > > > > Have a look at > > > > http://northwind.codeplex.com/Wiki/View.aspx?title=Home > > > > I have added subject sections. > > Are they OK with you? (I hope they are not sounding too ambitious.) > > > > Please use CodePlex wiki features to make the text of the subject > sections > > as you wanted it to be, please correct my English when needed - > especially > > when it sounds too ambitious, lengthy or heavy for your native English > > speakers ears... > > > > Thank you. > > > > -- > > Shamil > > > > _______________________________________________ > > dba-VB mailing list > > dba-VB at databaseadvisors.com > > http://databaseadvisors.com/mailman/listinfo/dba-vb > > http://www.databaseadvisors.com > > > > _______________________________________________ > dba-VB mailing list > dba-VB at databaseadvisors.com > http://databaseadvisors.com/mailman/listinfo/dba-vb > http://www.databaseadvisors.com > >