[dba-VB] CodePlex Northwind.NET - Welcome, Mission Statement and Roadmap sections added to home page

Arthur Fuller fuller.artful at gmail.com
Tue Apr 21 06:57:10 CDT 2009


Hi Shamil,

I have touched up your English text and hopefully improved it a little.

Arthur

On Tue, Apr 21, 2009 at 6:28 AM, Mike Mattys <mmattys at rochester.rr.com>wrote:

> Warm.
> Inviting.
> Humorous.
> A touch of wonder added, as well.
> Very good!
>
> -
> Michael R Mattys
> MapPoint and Database Dev
> www.mattysconsulting.com
> -
>
> ----- Original Message -----
> From: "Salakhetdinov Shamil" <mcp2004 at mail.ru>
> To: "dba-VB" <dba-vb at databaseadvisors.com>
> Sent: Tuesday, April 21, 2009 6:13 AM
> Subject: [dba-VB] CodePlex Northwind.NET - Welcome,Mission Statement and
> Roadmap sections added to home page
>
>
> > Hi SCRUM Team,
> >
> > Have a look at
> >
> > http://northwind.codeplex.com/Wiki/View.aspx?title=Home
> >
> > I have added subject sections.
> > Are they OK with you? (I hope they are not sounding too ambitious.)
> >
> > Please use CodePlex wiki features to make the text of the subject
> sections
> > as you wanted it to be, please correct my English when needed -
> especially
> > when it sounds too ambitious, lengthy or heavy for your native English
> > speakers ears...
> >
> > Thank you.
> >
> > --
> > Shamil
> >
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