[dba-VB] CodePlex Northwind.NET - Welcome, Mission Statement and Roadmap sections added to home page

Hi Arthur,

Thank you.

I have only changed back punctuation of one sentence:

"...to use the right tools for the right jobs: for everybody's advantage."

':' symbol is intentionally used in it to make a longer pause while reading this sentence than a pause, which is used when comma ',' separates parts of a sentence - is that OK?

--
Shamil

-----Original Message-----
From: Arthur Fuller <fuller.artful at gmail.com>
To: "Discussion concerning Visual Basic and related programming issues." <dba-vb at databaseadvisors.com>
Date: Tue, 21 Apr 2009 07:57:10 -0400
Subject: Re: [dba-VB] CodePlex Northwind.NET - Welcome, Mission Statement and Roadmap sections added to home page

> Hi Shamil,
> 
> I have touched up your English text and hopefully improved it a little.
> 
> Arthur
> 
> On Tue, Apr 21, 2009 at 6:28 AM, Mike Mattys <mmattys at rochester.rr.com>wrote:
> 
> > Warm.
> > Inviting.
> > Humorous.
> > A touch of wonder added, as well.
> > Very good!
> >
> > -
> > Michael R Mattys
> > MapPoint and Database Dev
> > www.mattysconsulting.com
> > -
> >
> > ----- Original Message -----
> > From: "Salakhetdinov Shamil" <mcp2004 at mail.ru>
> > To: "dba-VB" <dba-vb at databaseadvisors.com>
> > Sent: Tuesday, April 21, 2009 6:13 AM
> > Subject: [dba-VB] CodePlex Northwind.NET - Welcome,Mission Statement and
> > Roadmap sections added to home page
> >
> >
> > > Hi SCRUM Team,
> > >
> > > Have a look at
> > >
> > > http://northwind.codeplex.com/Wiki/View.aspx?title=Home
> > >
> > > I have added subject sections.
> > > Are they OK with you? (I hope they are not sounding too ambitious.)
> > >
> > > Please use CodePlex wiki features to make the text of the subject
> > sections
> > > as you wanted it to be, please correct my English when needed -
> > especially
> > > when it sounds too ambitious, lengthy or heavy for your native English
> > > speakers ears...
> > >
> > > Thank you.
> > >
> > > --
> > > Shamil
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