[dba-VS] Part III: Cross-posted from dba-OT: MVVM explained - looking for English language heavy review/revision, and technical review

Salakhetdinov Shamil mcp2004 at mail.ru
Sun Sep 6 15:25:13 CDT 2015



In the following "essay" a Model, a ViewModel and a View are 
actually a Model Instance, a ViewModel instance and a View 
instance. Or even a set of a Model-type instances, a ViewModel-type
instances and a View-type instances.
The issues I'd expect to be found in the "essay"'s text:
- improper use of indefinite and definite articles, 
- improper use of the Present or Continuous Tenses, or
just improper use of Grammatical tenses in
general,
- words'/sentences' repetitions, 
- poor command English or tongue-tied English,
- punctuation,
- wrong usage of prepositions and postpositions;
- wrong usage of verbs, words combinations,
- writing style in general,
- mistypings,
- ...
(to be continued in 'Part IV'...)
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Салахетдинов Шамиль


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